Friday, 13 July 2012

Monday, 25 June 2012

My Story

Unexpectedly Mia my best friend burst into the room (without knocking which was breaking one of my rules) screamed as loud as anything alive and told me the best news ever.SHE HAD 2 JUSTIN BIEBER TICKETS!!! we were jumping around the room ecstatically in a pool of tears of joy.

Three days later...

Me and my mum stood outside waiting in suspense for Mia and her mum .I wanted to go in but I couldn't if I tried as Mia still had the tickets.  Eventually after ten whole minuites they arrived. I grabbed Mia's arm pulled her inside "wait!" exclaimed Mia "can't we get popcorn?". "No!" I  bellowed "we've waisted enough time already!"   I charged into the theatre with Mia close behind where I collapsed in my 3rd row seat.   I was dazzled at how big the room was but the mood made everything seem just right.  The music started playing loud "this is amazing" mia approved "but it would be better if i had popcorn".  Just at that moment he emerged from the smoke and began an amazing concert with the famous song love me.

In the middle of love me he stared at me and winked i didnt want to move not even blink. And to this day i cannot believe he chose me.  We shared a moment and I called it ours.  You peeked your way into my heart.  If only i could ask him to play that part.  "its ending can we go and get popcorn for the way home now?"asked mia "one minute" i replied .  When he walked off of the stage he glanced at me last now im sure he has a place in my heart.  I went backstage and he held me tight but then i realised i was stuck in my own daydream awoken by a shake of the shoulder from a best friend wanting popcorn.  For that time in my daydream where we were frozen in time frozen forever i knew that one day i will marry Justin Bieber. 
By
  Jessica McLoughlin

This story was ispired by the justin bieber poem by the electronic poetry company which can be found in my poetry anthology xx

Sunday, 3 June 2012

hope u liked me poetry anthology thanks 4 readin xxxxxxxxxxxx<3 :)
hey! this is my most favourite poem of all time once reading plz leave a comment but I'm sure you'll luv it too!

justin drew bieber

Although i'm not your one less lonely girl
I hope you pick me to be where are you now
I'll be your favorite girl 
When U smile, I'll smile
I'm down to earth just like you
I hope you love me, Dr. Bieber
I'll Never Say Never
Because you were born to be somebody
I just need somebody to love
And that should be me
Stuck in the moment with you


i LOVE this poem because it speaks for me xxxxxxxxxxx


hi! this is my fave ballad poem 


bridal ballad


The ring is on my hand,
And the wreath is on my brow;
Satin and jewels grand
Are all at my command,
And I am happy now.

And my lord he loves me well;
But, when first he breathed his vow,
I felt my bosom swell-
For the words rang as a knell,
And the voice seemed his who fell
In the battle down the dell,
And who is happy now.

But he spoke to re-assure me,
And he kissed my pallid brow,
While a reverie came o'er me,
And to the church-yard bore me,
And I sighed to him before me,
Thinking him dead D'Elormie,
"Oh, I am happy now!"

And thus the words were spoken,
And this the plighted vow,
And, though my faith be broken,
And, though my heart be broken,
Here is a ring, as token
That I am happy now!

Would God I could awaken!
For I dream I know not how!
And my soul is sorely shaken
Lest an evil step be taken,-
Lest the dead who is forsaken
May not be happy now.


i like this ballad because it is very creative
hey this is my poem written b4 the 20th century

this little bag

this little bag i hope will prove
to be not vainly made
for if you should a needle want
it will afford you aid
and as we are about to part
t'will serve another end
for when you look upon the bag
you'll recollect your friend

          by
            jane austen

i like this poem because it talks about loyalty to a friend

hi this is my haiku hope u like it as much as i do

justin bieber haiku

you are in my heart
i love you more day by day
love justin bieber

i like this haiku because it is very simple but also very loving