Monday, 25 June 2012

My Story

Unexpectedly Mia my best friend burst into the room (without knocking which was breaking one of my rules) screamed as loud as anything alive and told me the best news ever.SHE HAD 2 JUSTIN BIEBER TICKETS!!! we were jumping around the room ecstatically in a pool of tears of joy.

Three days later...

Me and my mum stood outside waiting in suspense for Mia and her mum .I wanted to go in but I couldn't if I tried as Mia still had the tickets.  Eventually after ten whole minuites they arrived. I grabbed Mia's arm pulled her inside "wait!" exclaimed Mia "can't we get popcorn?". "No!" I  bellowed "we've waisted enough time already!"   I charged into the theatre with Mia close behind where I collapsed in my 3rd row seat.   I was dazzled at how big the room was but the mood made everything seem just right.  The music started playing loud "this is amazing" mia approved "but it would be better if i had popcorn".  Just at that moment he emerged from the smoke and began an amazing concert with the famous song love me.

In the middle of love me he stared at me and winked i didnt want to move not even blink. And to this day i cannot believe he chose me.  We shared a moment and I called it ours.  You peeked your way into my heart.  If only i could ask him to play that part.  "its ending can we go and get popcorn for the way home now?"asked mia "one minute" i replied .  When he walked off of the stage he glanced at me last now im sure he has a place in my heart.  I went backstage and he held me tight but then i realised i was stuck in my own daydream awoken by a shake of the shoulder from a best friend wanting popcorn.  For that time in my daydream where we were frozen in time frozen forever i knew that one day i will marry Justin Bieber. 
By
  Jessica McLoughlin

This story was ispired by the justin bieber poem by the electronic poetry company which can be found in my poetry anthology xx

Sunday, 3 June 2012

hope u liked me poetry anthology thanks 4 readin xxxxxxxxxxxx<3 :)
hey! this is my most favourite poem of all time once reading plz leave a comment but I'm sure you'll luv it too!

justin drew bieber

Although i'm not your one less lonely girl
I hope you pick me to be where are you now
I'll be your favorite girl 
When U smile, I'll smile
I'm down to earth just like you
I hope you love me, Dr. Bieber
I'll Never Say Never
Because you were born to be somebody
I just need somebody to love
And that should be me
Stuck in the moment with you


i LOVE this poem because it speaks for me xxxxxxxxxxx


hi! this is my fave ballad poem 


bridal ballad


The ring is on my hand,
And the wreath is on my brow;
Satin and jewels grand
Are all at my command,
And I am happy now.

And my lord he loves me well;
But, when first he breathed his vow,
I felt my bosom swell-
For the words rang as a knell,
And the voice seemed his who fell
In the battle down the dell,
And who is happy now.

But he spoke to re-assure me,
And he kissed my pallid brow,
While a reverie came o'er me,
And to the church-yard bore me,
And I sighed to him before me,
Thinking him dead D'Elormie,
"Oh, I am happy now!"

And thus the words were spoken,
And this the plighted vow,
And, though my faith be broken,
And, though my heart be broken,
Here is a ring, as token
That I am happy now!

Would God I could awaken!
For I dream I know not how!
And my soul is sorely shaken
Lest an evil step be taken,-
Lest the dead who is forsaken
May not be happy now.


i like this ballad because it is very creative
hey this is my poem written b4 the 20th century

this little bag

this little bag i hope will prove
to be not vainly made
for if you should a needle want
it will afford you aid
and as we are about to part
t'will serve another end
for when you look upon the bag
you'll recollect your friend

          by
            jane austen

i like this poem because it talks about loyalty to a friend

hi this is my haiku hope u like it as much as i do

justin bieber haiku

you are in my heart
i love you more day by day
love justin bieber

i like this haiku because it is very simple but also very loving




hey!
this is my fave animal poem

the cat

the cat shot over the sleeping dog
and caught it with its paw
the cat shot over the table
the dog chased him through the door

the cat shot over the tv
and landed in the chair
the cat shot over the ceiling light
springs shot him through the air

the cat shot over the mirror
a cat gave him a fright
the cat shot over his image
but didn't want to fight

the cat shot over the fireplace
burnt tail on red hot coal
the cat shot over the hearthrug
like a firework on a roll

the cat shot over the window ledge
burnt curtains caught in the nets
the cat shot over in dads old car
for a visit to the vets
           
              by
                david threadgold

i like this poem because in other poems the first line and second rhyme and the third and fourth but the cat
has lines two and four rhyming

hey! again
this is my fave school poem ope u like

i can't go to school

i can't go to school because i am sick
if i walk out my house will get hit by a brick
i can't go to school because i am afraid
on my way there i might get run over by a huge parade
i can't go to school because i have a funeral to attend
school uniforms just arnt the trend
i can't go to school because i got up late
i broke my thumb while learning to skate
i cant go to school because i feel a little blue
my brother stuck my hands together with super glue
i cant go to school because school is boring
i wonder what excuses ill have tomorrow morning
                     by
                      jasmine shipp

 like this poem because it is very amusing and it gives you ideas so that you don't have to go to school
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Hey!
 This is my favorite love poem hope u luv it as much as I do
 Justin bieber love poem
 I was at your concert last night
The room so big,the mood so right
There I was in my 3rd row seat
Wishing so bad that we could meet

Your music was playing loud
But you chose me out of the crowd
You smiled and gave me a wink
I didn't want to move not even blink

We shared a moment
 It was ours and we owned it
You are the only one in my heart
Please say you are willing to play the part

You walked off the stage and gave me one last look
I knew right then my heart you had took
It was such a special night
I wanted to have you to hold me tight

For that moment we were together
Frozen in time frozen forever
I hope you remember me too
For one day Justin bieber I will marry you
                      By
                       The electronic poetry company

 I like this poem because of the way they expressed their feelings and my favourate Line has to be the last one




Saturday, 2 June 2012

hey!
this is me fave war poem

war is

war is an act of nature
like causing death will make you strong
war can be so immature
happening when an accident goes wrong

war is so useless
nothing follows in its tracks
war is a rememberance
the battles all placed on a map

war is full of tears
tears that will cry
war is like a warning so insacure
one mistake u will surely die

war iz a resolution
to the people who have shaped iron cllad fists
war iz a part of everything cruel
cruel iz wot war iz 

             by
               harold hills

i like this poem because the writer gives thier point of view
hi this is my favourate sad poem

sad people

sad people
with sad hearts
sad reasons
for sad thoughts
sad times
in sad places
so many sad things
to think about
and the saddest thing is
our time is running out

         by
           morgan bodden

i like this poem because it says whatz sad and givez sutible reasons

Friday, 1 June 2012

my funny poem

slicing salami
the strangest, strange stranger i met in my life
was the man who made use of his nose as a knife
he'd slice up salami, tomatoes and cheese
at the tip of his nose with phenomenal ease

he'd buy food in bulk at incredible prices
and then use his nose to reduce it to slices
his wife ran away and i know that he'll miss her
the woman was frightened that one day he'd kiss her!

by denise rodgers

i like this poem because it is very interesting funny and humourous.  my favourate quote is "the woman was frightened that one day he'd kiss her!"
hey!
this is my english blog where ill be updating me poetry anthology hope u enjoy :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) !